I am uncertain about the adverb in this case (I wonder if there might be another, more powerful one), but I love the structure and the character who is portrayed. The conflict is clear and there is even a resolution. This is a strong six word piece! Good job.
1/7/2012Loren says:
This really makes you think, and envision a whole story going on. I love it.
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