She was lovely. Then things changed.


There are 17 comments in this article:

  1. 2/27/2013lovely says:

    wow i’m like 90% sure this is written about me. or maybe I’m crazy. who knows.

  2. 3/7/2013K says:

    If you are my old friend Ben, I want you to know that I will always be half in love with you.

  3. 3/9/2013Nolan says:

    I know just what you mean.

  4. 3/19/2013Nancy says:

    Sadly. Nothing ever stays the same.

  5. 3/20/2013Janee W says:

    good girls can always go bad

  6. 3/27/2013Melissa says:

    this is one of the best six word stories I have read :)

  7. 4/23/2013Rob says:

    This is excellent.

    I hope you don’t mind if I use it as an example for the year 7 English class I teach

  8. 5/21/2013shorty says:

    i know what you feel but thats life

  9. 5/29/2013Jp says:

    Oh wow – – stories that touch on the soul strings of everything make you gasp. Like this one did. Well done, Ben.

  10. 6/12/2013person says:

    ugh i feel like this could be about me. Nice work though. Just sad that it brings me closer to reality than I’d like to be.

  11. 10/1/2013Dianne says:


  12. 10/1/2013Dianne says:

    Him? Yes. Why? Mistake. Me? No.

  13. 10/9/2013Stories in Exactly Six Words | Ramisa the Authoress says:

    […] She was lovely. Then things changed. —Ben […]

  14. 11/25/2013kat47 says:

    He was kind; then he changed.

  15. 12/2/2013Tamara says:

    Fallen for my boyfriend’s best friend.

  16. 12/15/2013Constanza says:

    I was unhappy, then you appear.

  17. 3/7/2014kelly says:

    oh Ben, I will always be in love with you. Even when youre with her and i’m all alone

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